Friday, January 29, 2010
Weekend!!!
I can't believe were already done with the fourth week of class. I found Tuesdaysclass very helpful, Kate is right when she said we all try to be "nice" to each other when writing our essays, but the honesty is what helps. Luckily, I got a parter who was pretty critical but brought up some very valid points I hadn't thought of. I'm excited about our next essay, I've been thinking of what to write about, I think I'm gonna take Kate's advice and flip through my favorite magizines. Hope you ladies all have a great weekend! See you girls Tuesday!
Thursday, January 28, 2010
These weeks are flying by and i'm pretty happy about that! The narrative essay wasn't to bad i couldn't figure out anything to write about when it came to food or social networking though luckily i got to write about my move to Gainesville instead. I'm not looking forward to this next essay. The only good thing is that everyone gets to pick pretty much their own topic and what they want to compare and contrast and what not. The peer review is a good way for us to help each other out, i just didn't know we had to answer the questions until the very end of class i thought it was just editing things we noticed were wrong. I do think it will be hard changing up the essay so much like we were told today because the kids we looked at went from boring to really good and i don't know if thats going to be easy to change it up so much.
Week Four
This week has been a bit different form my previous weeks. I haven't got much rest at all, assignments are elevating, and there isn't enough hours in the day or week. (I know that's so cliché, but that's what this week makes me feel like). My fan-base for objective writing has never been popular. Hearing that there was another essay assignment wasn't exciting news until I thought about what good could come from it; the essay kind of gives me a chance to exercise some new techniques. I see it as an opportunity to make an improvement in my writing or as a chance to show how much improvement I need with writing. I suppose I'll see, but of course, my best efforts will be put forth. I also can't help but to continuously question myself about peer reviews, because I'm not a strong writer I don't see how well I could review someone’s paper. Maybe I will feel different further in the semester (only time will tell).
Wednesday, January 27, 2010
WOW week FOUR :)
Thursday, January 21, 2010
"The Modern Hunter-Gatherer" had a lot going on in it. The writer was very descriptive with they way he wrote, and was always questioning himself about things that he did and things that were going on. I felt this was a little long as well for this story, i felt like there was a lot of things that were getting repeated also. But i think the meaning behind the whole thing was good and after reading it, it was an alright essay, just not sure if i could ever write like that! It was weird how he kept comparing the pig to humans, like when he said it weighed exactly as much as him as if he felt bad because that's like a human hanging from that tree, that could be him that someone is cutting open cleaning so it can be eaten. The after the kill he didn't really want to eat it anymore but then felt like it was his responsibility to eat it since he already killed it he can't just not eat it and have killed the pig for no reason at all.
The Flu SUCKS!!!!
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Do you hunt your food?
I did not like the article "The Modern Hunter-Gatherer". I can very well see the author's point of view but I did not feel like it was nessecery to take 12 pages to say the same thing over and over. I am still confused on where the author stands about hunting? I think he has a respect for it, but will he ever hunt again? I guess I'm waiting for class on Thursday, maybe some points will be brought up that I havn't realised.
Are you a hunter?
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
Sleeping on some things
Saturday, January 16, 2010
Just a reminder girls!
Friday, January 15, 2010
Thursday, January 14, 2010
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
Nike, You Really are a RAT!
Whoa, let me say that Jonah Peretti and Nike both have some nerve. First of all, I've always worn Nike's and found them comfortable, but after reading this article I will think hard before buying another pair of Nike's. I think when Jonah actually changed his request is should have stated "Thank you Vietnamese people for making my shoes and going through verbal and physical abuse for me to recieve them" Get a grip Nike, treat your employees better.