These weeks are flying by and i'm pretty happy about that! The narrative essay wasn't to bad i couldn't figure out anything to write about when it came to food or social networking though luckily i got to write about my move to Gainesville instead. I'm not looking forward to this next essay. The only good thing is that everyone gets to pick pretty much their own topic and what they want to compare and contrast and what not. The peer review is a good way for us to help each other out, i just didn't know we had to answer the questions until the very end of class i thought it was just editing things we noticed were wrong. I do think it will be hard changing up the essay so much like we were told today because the kids we looked at went from boring to really good and i don't know if thats going to be easy to change it up so much.